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PROMPTuesday Redux

From Deb, Write a poem in 10-minutes or less, 250 words or less. Include the following three phrases:

“I tie a ribbon in a foolish way”
“The delicious fragility of this travesty”
“Where we still laugh and wish”
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I can’t stand the delicious fragility of this travesty one second longer.
His face was twisted and red.
I’m sorry, I said. Were you talking to me or rehearsing a line?
I looked at my mud-splattered feet instead of his eyes.
I thought of summer ending and other endings and
I rocked forward on my toes, trying to lift myself
From the spot where we still laugh and wish.
Or anyway, the place where he does still.
I’m done with it there.
I tie a ribbon in a foolish way, remember.
He’d pointed it out once
And never let me forget it.
Gravity kept me on the ground but it’s a
Vertical force so instead
I spun on my heel and walked in
A new direction
To a place where I’ll tie ribbons
However the hell I want.


7 Comments

This is so very, very Aaryn, and why I love you.

Posted by Cheri @ Blog This Mom! on 16 September 2008 @ 4pm

“To a place where I’ll tie ribbons
However the hell I want.”

Yes indeed you will.
And I’m glad for it.

Posted by San Diego Momma on 16 September 2008 @ 8pm

You are so fabulous, a seemingly endless store of talents.

This poem freakin’ rocks, my friend!

Posted by Tina on 16 September 2008 @ 8pm

Thanks, ladies.
(Humbled. Humbled.)

Posted by Aaryn on 16 September 2008 @ 9pm

That’s just beautiful! Sometimes, I just want to crawl inside your head and visit for awhile ;)

Posted by melanie on 17 September 2008 @ 6am

@melanie: No, you don’t. It’s scary in there!

Posted by Aaryn on 17 September 2008 @ 8am

LOL! It can’t be any scarier than what’s in MY head. Have you SEEN my “darkside” set on Flickr? :D

Posted by melanie on 17 September 2008 @ 10am

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